The Kiss

What Is a Kiss? A touch? A taste? A need?

His mouth
sought out her neck
nibbling soft
with eager lips her flesh
her perfumed skin
in ache to taste
her perspiration light
and sweet upon his tongue
he drew her in
and drank her deep...


upon her pleasured moan



sedated.

Author's Note

Honesty please

Reviews

[raindroplove]

mmmmmmm.......... i feel it right now..............

[Madame]

i loved how you ended this. it was short, but just enough to let the imagination go. ofc that is how a kiss is, short but just enough. and definitely sedating. i look forward to reading more.

[J Todd Underhill]

Honestly I wanted more from this poem. It was good for a shorter piece, but it was a tease. It got me going only to stop short of fulfilling me.

[VelvetRosetta]

Wow, you had me ina trance...he drank her deep, this line gave me sensual chills! VERY, VERY NICE!

[Daytonight]

So very seductive and sensual. Well done. Keep on penning.

[KimLove "The Beautiful ..]

All I could think was....mmmmmmmmmm, I think that covers it. So sensual Shadow, the depth you have taped into in just a few short likes amazing. Bravo

[dutch2lips]

hmm you do know your sensuality, well penned!