Beneath a lightbulb moon

Beneath a lightbulb moon

A Poem by Inyourshadow
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Jacob making fun from chores

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He sails a sauce pan in the sink
a mast made from a spoon,
and maps his ocean black as ink
beneath a light bulb moon.

He is searching for the islands
that they call the Dirty Plates,
with golden beach of breadcrumb sands
beyond the Gravy Straits.

Where macaroni dolphins leap
beyond French Fries Lagoon,
and sing their songs as sailors sleep
beneath a light bulb moon.

Beware the corn cob crocodiles
that lurk beneath the foam,
betraying folks with welcome smiles
within their bone strewn home.

He navigates the boiling oil
and safely through the ice,
to find a place to hide his spoil
away from other mice.

So island claimed x marks the spot
his sailing days at end,
and I at last wash up my pots
that so amused our friend.





© 2011 Inyourshadow


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I love this Shadow, you almost make washing dishes sound so very fun. This was such a playful piece with words and objects. jacob truly has a wonderful imagination. xo

Posted 13 Years Ago


this is brilliant, omg the huge grin on my face confirms it. well penned!

Posted 13 Years Ago


i really thought of kids reading this
i would loved to have read this to my children when they were small
it is pretty cool :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is one of my faves I have read in Jacobs adventures and I would say IMO one of your best...
This made me smile and was very amusing, pot washing will be fun today :d Delightful!
I hope you put all these together and really think about getting them published...Children of all ages would love them, and would make a great gift xx

Posted 13 Years Ago


I absolutely love this adventure of Jacob's! He always seems to have the most fun! Well done! Keep on penning.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on June 21, 2011
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Tags: Funny, humour, children, comedy, lullaby

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Inyourshadow
Inyourshadow

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I am trying to broaden my abilities as a writer, hoping to learn new styles and ways to express myself. I am married with 4 kids and a beautiful grandson, plus my two wonderful yorkshire terriers T.. more..

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