Jacob Arise

My muse a mouse named Jacob, he has been absent too long thought it time he penned once more

Jacob weave for me a dream
of Candy Cotton Land,
where chocolate rivers softly flow
beside the sherbet sand.

Jacob weave for me a dream
of trees with lollipops,
and fields filled with liquiice flowers
with soft marshmallow tops.

Jacob weave for me a dream
with grass of marzipan,
where the children play and laugh all day
in Candy Cotton Land.

Reviews

[Raspberry Rebel]

Simply a delightful read where children from 0-80 can emmerse themselves in a wonderful fantasy land...

[francinebc]

This is amazing!!
can just see it in my head.
can i ask? Whi is jacob, i have noted that he is in a few of your poems.
well dont awesome

[Ruth]

Oh wow!
Such amazing metaphor and imagery..this struck me to the very core!
xx

[annie minus]

Aaaw this is gorgeous! I love the fantastical imagery, I'm sure this would be highly appealing to children and adults alike, a lovely flowing read. Annie :)

[Becky C Strukamp]

This poem is such sheer pleasure to read. Light and sweet!!Love it!!

[Daytonight]

I am so happy to see Jacob! I hope he weaves a sweet dream for me! Wonderful poem! Keep Jacob penning.