Koi

Koi

A Poem by Inyourshadow
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Fish pond ballet

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They trace his going
in a watery ballet
of natural love


© 2011 Inyourshadow


Author's Note

Inyourshadow
My uncles funeral yesterday spent time reflecting on our chats as I stared into his treasured pond.

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Sorry to hear of your uncle, I can imagine them dancing a sad ballet in his memory.
Funny how we can remember someone and the least significant thing in life becomes the most treasured of them all.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Written in a lovely way, full of emotions. Nicely done.


Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on June 15, 2011
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Inyourshadow
Inyourshadow

United Kingdom



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I am trying to broaden my abilities as a writer, hoping to learn new styles and ways to express myself. I am married with 4 kids and a beautiful grandson, plus my two wonderful yorkshire terriers T.. more..

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