Whispered truths

words of love

Lay soft
sweet skin
on moistened flesh
absorbing salt
from whispered truths
in this
our first kiss
of many.

Author's Note

For a contest of 12-20 words be honest please

Reviews

[dutch2lips]

very well penned, very sensual

[Allen Smuckler]

I loved it...great job
not an easy task to explore a first kiss in 20 words or left...
You certainly succeeded
allen

[Becky C Strukamp]

You chose your words well and I think its a winner!!

[KimLove "The Beautiful ..]

This is really strong, love it. : )

[E.V. Black]

Hee, I think I know what contest this is for. KimLove, by any chance? :3
Wonderful and beautiful and quite enticing at the same time. You create an entrancing effect with just a few words.

[Silverwing]

I don't get it... Its like its a sentence, but it doesn't make sense to me.