Spun Silk

A poem about morning flowers

Spun jeweled silk
caught
the lights
that playful danced,

illuminating
so soft
her natural beauty.

Reviews

[Sukriti Suki]

Hmmmmm nice imagery and a nice short piece. Though what are your ideas about using ' softly' instead of ' soft' in the last stanza and ' playfully' instead of ' playful' in first....it can come down to personal choice. Enjoying your work.

[Poetic-Theorem]

Beautiful brevity, brevity is "one" of my weakest writing links, it takes much talent to paint imagery in few words as you have done here. Wonderful work. David

[Daytonight]

You so beautifully described the flowers in the morning. Well done. Keep on penning!