Mehdi

it doesn't have to make sense or be right

I have a friend named Mehdi,

He's weird like I,

He's a good friend of mine,

He kinda looks like an adorable porkiepine,

He's always trying to understand me,

But my weirdness is a complete mystery,

It's a place where ninja kitties ride on unipickles,

And evil monsters lurk looking to tickle,

He always makes me happy when I'm sad,

He thinks it's adorable when I'm mad -.-,

He's always been there,

He's always cared,

He's a nice porkiepine,

And his name is Mehdi.

Reviews

[Davidgeo]

Are the spelling errors purposeful? Cause there's a few.

Why are people so sad to see you threaten to leave? This was a pretty s****y poem. I'd expect this from a 10 year old student being forced to write poetry as an assignment.

Frankly, this was a pile of garbage.

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Haha. A nice little write, Dead.

I can see your talent here. We all have doubts about our work. You just have to have faith in your own ability and in your self.
Read the poems of others. Note words, style, stucture. Then experiment a bit and see what happens.

You are not worthless, buddy. Chin up, okay?

[Dead]

im a girl o.o

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Haha. Oops! Sorry!! ☺

[Dead]

it's okay ^_^ lol I was Shattered Ruby, Danny's Goddess, and Slowly Fading Away