Sick

About a person I thought I could trust. But of course they didn't care enough to try to understand.

I'm so sick of you making my head reel,

I'm so sick of how you make me feel,

Brother I tried,

Last time you left I cried,

But I'm so sick of losing family,

So if you can't deal with me,

Just go away,

And I'll get over it one day.

Author's Note

It isnt finished

Reviews

[Davidgeo]

Well, because everything else you have written is so genericly whiny as to be clearly fake I can't take you seriously. Your writing indicates that you are the type to fabricate a real life tragedy.

Not like this was well written, it's not. But because you seem to have no artistic credibility I won't be able to take your attempts at these types of themes seriously.

Being the site crybaby crying for attention all the time, yeah, it's not a good idea.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

well, I'd love to read the full poem.