Insecure

The voices in my head shout,

How are you and him going to work out.

Because you are nothing,

He is everything,

You are worthless,

He is priceless,

And you are nobody,

While he is somebody,

It echos in my ears,

It's making me close to tears,

They talk all night,

And the sad part is they're right,

I'm to insecure,

Way too unsure,

The voices say he's here because of pity,

Because I'm nowhere near pretty,

They say I should just pick up the knife,

Because without him what do I have in life,

I have parents who fight,

Day and night,

Friends who use me,

Even when I'm drowning in misery,

And people who pretend to care,

But when I need them they're never there,

But, it's not voices telling me this you see,

It's really only me.

Author's Note

Sorry it sucks and I was really upset when I made it.

Reviews

[idiotproof--1]

this is a great poem. it's really good that you can rhyme your poems (I personally find it very difficult). I really enjoyed reading this. keep up the good writing.

[Obscured by the Shadows]

This poem doesn't suck by any form of the word. The rhyming scheme is cliche, but plenty of poets, even I, use the scheme you've used here. The words are so full of ripe emotion it even brought tears to my eyes, brought out my anxiety. It is a terrible think, insecurities; they keep me from being truly happy. Keep writing, my dear, it will take you places.

[Dead]

Thanks lol it came from my emotions

[Obscured by the Shadows]

Which is where all writing should come from.

[Dead]

Very true :)

[Naajia Collins]

i loved this , you just stated how i be feeling inside like you very good and i hope you keep writing

[Dead]

Thank you!!! :)

[JoshuaCmngs]

Uh, you say it sucks, but it is pretty much better than anything I've written. I think we have some promising talent here.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

I'm really sorry you are going though so much.
You shouldn't feel like this no one is worthless, and I'm sure you are very much worthy of great love.
You are so freaking talented I swear I love your work.
If you ever need someone to talk to I'm a message away, just to let you know.
Stick to your writing because you are crazy good.

Anyway this was so deep, so meaningful, so emotion filled, and really captures the readers heart.
I'm sure some people can relate to feeling like this, I have depression and I can relate to some of this.
Brilliant write really, just brilliant.
Keep writing :)

[Scrap]

The voices are echoes of what you've experienced haunting you through you. Horrid thought. But true to many.

I watched 'Good Will Hunting' yesterday for the very first time. 'It's not you fault'....i too broke.

Great that you can put this to words.

Take care. X

[Dead]

Thank you :)

[CiNtsaLis]

*smiles* I like it- I love it- I feel it deep in my heart. (:

[Dead]

Awe Thanks :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

No, you're wrong!
I'm nothing without you, and I'm not here for you out of pity,
i love you the way you are. :)

[Dead]

I love you too *kisses your cheek*