Waking Up

My heartbeat accelerates

I can feel you enter the room

And inside I celebrate 

As my heart begins to bloom

I feel your gaze

As you stare at my back

All of a sudden my head becomes a maze

And I'm worried about what I lack

Then you take the seat in front of me

And all my thoughts quiet down

The air is alive with electricity 

I'm amazed it didn't short circuit the whole town

Then I realized a new chapter has began

As one we stand up

And you take my hand

That was the moment I woke up

To the realization that for the rest of eternity

It was only you and me.

Author's Note

Um well I have no clue if it makes sense O.o

Reviews

[Sally Hope]

It makes perfect sense, Ruby. Atleast to those who've been - or ARE - in love, it does. Your words are very honest and very intimate, and I couldn't help but feel I shouldn't be reading this; it's too personal, too YOURS, if you know what I mean. But then, I'm also glad that you shared it. I can never be a romantic like you, but that doesn't mean we can't think romantically, does it? :)

[RJ]

the funny part is i wasnt in love when i wrote it -Ruby

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

your such a romantic aren't you?
Who doesn't love romantic poems, especially when there this good.
I loved this one to, you have such talent.
This was so meaningful, filled with love and emotion, it was so deep and powerful.
Your rhyming brings it all together to and its just perfect.
Love love love, one of the best writers work iv read on here in quite awhile, I love your poetry :)

[RJ]

thanks :) n yeah i am haha -Dead

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

:) haha your welcome :)

[Aphy!]

It makes perfect sense
I really enjoyed reading this lovely piece
I could relate to the situation and the emotions behind this piece
Really appreciate your work and I truly enjoy reading your stuff
Loved the flow of it all and the effortlessness it gave out

Keep writing buddy
You're doing great

Aphy

[Dani The Unreviewed]

yeah it does. :-)
this would very well go as a love poem. :-)
nice work, i like the story line, smooth. rhymes are not overdone, doesn't feel forced. . full rating :-)

[Dead]

awe thanks!

[Dani The Unreviewed]

my pleasure :)

[zunie frost]

wow !!! these words are so powerful !!!
My heartbeat accelerates
I can feel you enter the room
And inside I celebrate
above lines were great !!!
i love the flow !!!! thanks for sharing such a lovely work

[Dead]

Thanks :)

[zunie frost]

welcome !!!

[Rose Jaeger Kaneki]

This does make sense! I love this poem! Keep up the amazing work!
THIS IS AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Dalton]

The meaning is not obvious in the first read, which makes for an interesting analysis. I wonder if this piece is describing consummation, and the bond which it imparts, and perhaps lasts a long while.
This is an enjoyable read, and I look forward to reading more.

[Dead]

Awe thanks that means a lot :)