Monster

You told me you knew and understood 

That not all of me was good

But when I let you see my darkside

You ran to hide

Is the beast inside of me really that ugly

Is my heart really that bloody

I always knew I was a monster

It started when I could feel no longer

No emotions swirling inside of me

No way of making you see

I need you

Look at the pain in my eyes and you'll see it's true

I need you to save me

Because the beast inside is ugly

Reviews

[Dani The Unreviewed]

"it's scratching on the walls, in the closet, in the halls. in my body, in my head." some part of a song i loved...didn't listen to it since long. hmm. thanks for the reminder. :)
if you ask me, you're no monster. :)
everyone has a dark side.(only some are darker, and scarier than others.) like, lots of people would kill themselves, should they live only two hours with mine. yet some say "I'd love to be you"
don't. trust me. lol.
well, it's dark.
well written, simple, not overcomplicated. flows well.
full rating

[Blackheart]

You aren't a monster. You have the ability to create monsters inside your head. Just like everybody else. You are a poet. And you create art. Not everyone can do that. :)

[aruntp Thalassery]

The poem is like beauty and beast. the double personality expression. good work.

[Dead]

Thank you, that means a lot.

[Crimson Apples]

This was beautifully written, well worded, and blew my mind away. I loved it, though it makes me sad someone who could write something so amazing might feel this way, or had to go through that. =(
Gawsh, it was really expressive, and open. Absolutely WonDERfuL!

[Dead]

Thank you and it's okay I've gotten use to feeling like that.

[Rose Jaeger Kaneki]

so sad and beautiful.. you are not a monster