One With You

I am the moon,

You are my sun,

Without you I could not shine,

Without you I'd be lost.

I am the beach,

You are my water,

Without you I would be empty,

Without you I'd have no reason to be here.

I am an angel,

And you are my wings,

Without you I could not fly,

WIthout you I'd be broken.

I am one half,

And you are my other half,

Together we are complete,

We can conquer any feat. 

Reviews

[Bohrium Guy]

Very good visual and excellent writing.... Keep up the good work!

~Rob~

[Simon Welsh]

I like. Beats are all there. Has a good flow. Nice.

[Rose Jaeger Kaneki]

wow, I love the poem! wow, amazing