Suicide

I can hear them again,

The voices inside my head,

They tell me to sin,

To cut until I'm dead,

I close my eyes shut tight,

Against the shadows,

 Darker than night,

Trying to lure me past the shallows,

Into a world without sound,

Though it's nice there's no one around,

And fear stabs at me cold as ice,

It tells me to just go to sleep,

Maybe tonight I won't count sheep...

Reviews

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Haunting silence that is deafening!
Suicide is not the end of one body but murder of a hundred souls.
Its a crippling parasite whose host is sadness! But a simple truth people never understand is - Happiness is a choice and so is a happy life.
A powerful, moving write!

[Dead]

Thanks :) it means a lot.

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

You are very welcome. I hope to see happy poems.

[Dead]

Don't worry you will

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Cool! Till then let's celebrate life like Minions!

[Rose Jaeger Kaneki]

lol!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Sia Blood]

wow. I was blown away. As someone who battles with depressing I know how hard it is to feel alone and like giving up. This really spoke to me.

[Dead]

Thanks! :)

[Jake Donald Stephens]

I've tried to end it all a few times. So I've been there, believe me.
I like your style of poetry. The rhymes work well in this. :)

[Dead]

Thanks :) that means a lot

[Hope Rose]

This is a truly beautiful poem, one that tells the thoughts of every suicidal person in the world and I love this, truly I do. You have an amazing talent and I love reading what you write :)

[Dead]

Lol thanks Love you :)

[Hope Rose]

Love you too beautiful :)