Cold Hands

The hands always reach...clawing at my skin...I'm scared of the cold..of the pain ...I can feel it inside...hear my screams..no one comes and his hands hurt..I can't cry ..my eyes dead on his ....he rips my happiness from me..I can't tell..I'm silent..naked and afraid 

Reviews

[PloughBoy]

Sounds like the internal tormented screams of an abused child, Darkened_drear. Sadly, many children are forced to feel isolated and alone --like a dying soul on a desolate and deserted island-- when dealing with their abusers. Even more dire is that many cases go unexplored and unopened, until it is far too late.

Very dark, but I happen to enjoy darkness. it's much cooler there, in the shadows of shade, heh-heh...

[Darkened_drear]

The darkness is where one can disappear ..a shadow that will be faceless to the land of the bright..where strength and endurance is all that is known..a place where the unwanted creatures find a place to belong.

[PloughBoy]

Yes, that's what i always try and tell everyone. When asked why i write such dark stories and poems, I simply ask them if they've ever witnessed a sky full of twinkling stars in broad daylight. Of course, their answer is always "NO". Light can not exist without darkness. Stars require it to shine...

[Darkened_drear]

And without darkness where would they be able to play the game of hypocrisy ..darkness is essential because it has a more dramatically beautiful scenery and that is when the moon is its brightest thanks to the sun.Trees also look cooler in the night especially when they are twisted and dead

[PloughBoy]

Precisely...

[Darkened_drear]

Indeed........

[genocide]

so this means he's a predator and he takes everything he desires for himself

[yashmita13]

epic...simply beautiful. love it

[A. Amos]

I like your style of writing, honest, melancholy, deep and dark. I truly feel you are extremely talented writer and looking forward to read more of your work!

[Darkened_drear]

Thank you:)

[Blogger]

Whoa! This sounds like a bad dream.....? I cant even imagine what that would be like.

[Darkened_drear]

Bad dreams go away..this does not

[Joe_VILOT_]

cold hands against a night sky paint a veil of mortant dread.

Understood and addressed. Yes i want to say it's okay?

[Cthuloidism]

You might want to directly introduce the meaning of this story, because some can take it completely the wrong way. It's good, but unrelateable.

[Darkened_drear]

It is an emotion..a raped sensation..of fear and pain