Traitor

I see right through you

As you kneel at my feet

Oblivious to your defeat

A liar

And a traitor

'Ill kill you later

Nice and slow 

So you can feel what I feel

The closing in

Closeted core

Broken by countless w****s

Reviews

[Christopher Withers]

A forceful poem with deliciously dark overtones! I enjoyed the read :)

[Darkened_drear]

Thank you:)I was very aggressive when I wrote this piece

[Christopher Withers]

I hope you're feeling in a better place now :).

[Darkened_drear]

I am..I made it out of my own void

[Christopher Withers]

I tend towards the dark and melancholy so such a concept sounds appealing, you should write a piece on it ;)

[Darkened_drear]

I have written many pieces:)dark and twisted yet I have not put them on here