Fear

Feelings I hide so well

To you, it’s like we’re swell

In my head I’m screaming “don’t you see!”

Yet I’m smiling like nothings bugging me

Just now came into my life

Haven’t even told you about the knife..

Got my heart broken so long ago

That’s why talking to you scares me so

I know it won’t be long until you see

Changes there will be

First though, I’ll pull away

Yes I have the feeling you’ll want me to stay

But this fear inside me is too strong

Believe me I wish to be wrong

I thought talking to you would help the pain

Cause to me there was nothing to gain

Only though feelings are starting to arise

Don’t wish to bring back the late night cries

So believe me when I tell you

I wish I could stay too

Fear is a powerful emotion

One that can control someone’s motion

This one will always control mine

I’m starting to doubt I’ll ever be fine

Sorry doesn’t really capture it all

Tears fall when I don’t make that call.

Reviews

[Lily Belle]

Great rhyme and definitely an experience that anyone who has experienced heartache can relate to. I liked the internal push-and-pull as well. Nicely done.

[Angel]

Well, thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it

[Jocelyn cortes]

Fear of getting your heart broken once again can stop even the greatest of relationships. You make sure to describe the struggle of it, and how you wish you could grow past your fear; but it's not that easy. But anyway, I very much enjoyed your rhyme throughout this Peice. Keep it up.

[Angel]

Thank, I'll remember that for future writings :)