Who Knew?

Maybe someone walks into your life out of the blue

Hesitate cause of what I knew

But this one doesn’t seem so bad

Yet none of them had

I can see a friendship with this one

Which is better than a ton

Except I do not wish to have another fake

Because honestly there’s nothing left to take

Only wish to laugh and smile

To get the darkness off my back for awhile

Those beanie babies he plays around with

That fairytale guy is a myth

If only that guy who could laugh and kid was around where I live

Maybe then I can reach the light and survive

No it’s not the boy that’s catching my eye

It’s all about the fact that I don’t have to ask why

Isn’t about some guy to complete my life and make all the bad things go away

Instead it’s about knowing there is still good people in this world that keeps to what they say.

Reviews

[Harrison]

I enjoyed this poem and what it says not only about you, but about the people that we all meet in the world that seek to help us but fail.

[Angel]

Yeah well there are people who help and who hurt and sometimes they can be both. You never really know until you met them.

[KCthelastboyscout]

U have a keen perception of people and u have unique voice about it.i think you are a storyteller but more short story or novel.or maybe not your style.You are a pleasure to read

[Angel]

Well thank you. I like yours too, I've only read a couple though but still very good.

[Najam Us Saher]

Rhyming is really good just like the deep meaning of this poem...Nicely written...I liked it..

[Angel]

Thank you so much. Honestly I was scared no one would like it.

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome....Always give your poems a chance... :)

[Angel]

I will :) thank you