Go Away.

The pains of a breakup.

I’m tearing myself apart.

To find the source of this pain.

Where is it?

I want it to go away.

I always find myself in deep thought.

I’m in this alone again.

Is there no way out?

I’m going down.

I brought this upon myself.

I needed to do this.

There was no other way.

This is just the beginning.

 

But why does it have to end like this?

 

 

Reviews

[Deaths Cold Kiss]

this is really good, you describe a situation of mine exactly... good write

[jessiemei]

man, you got more comments than me T_T

but tis really good, im proud. listen to JJ about the growing.

[Elrebmik™]

deep, touching, and filled with emotion. great work!

[Arthur Crow]

This piece cuts deepy into the soul.. rivers of scarlet flow with emotion. Powerful work!

[Jack Joseph]

Breaking up is the most painful thing we can endure; the end is the beginning of a wonderful rebuilding. Take stock of your life, you're young take this chance to grow.

I think the poem was pretty well done, when you're making so many line breaks you don't always need full-stops.

Keep writing!

-JJ

[Dreamer (Kristen)]

I know what you mean.

Love the poem, the emotions in it are beautifully portraid.
Sweet dreams, Kristi