The Sadness

A poem about Suicide

A cold wind blew, the clouds blew with the cold wind. In the distance stood a girl, her black dress and pale skin were seen from the shinning sunset that seemed to move with the strong waves. The woman had black hair as night itself, her blue cold eyes could not be seen beneath her darkened stare that wore with the wind. Her dark hair blew violently as the sunset went further away from her, her hands raise and fold apon her chest as her blank and sadened eyes look apon the waves. Her tears streamed down her cheeks, each drip down like drops of rain that soon turn into poring rain. As her hands move down slowly away from her, so does the sun and the heart that lives inside her. As she stands on the moutain, her cold blue eyes close, But as you look all you can see is a distance memory of her pale sadened face as she is seen no more.

Author's Note

Uh ya

Reviews

[~The Queen~]

Very nice. It really shows how much suicide is on teens minds. Nice job Angel!! ;) Keep it up!!^^

[Berserker[Diktator Von ..]

Suicide is not a pretty subject. last tues my best friends ex committed suicide. But any way great job on the piece...

[Ericka Ray]

Don't be thinking about that!! You can't leave me in this donut depried world!! Come on man!!