The Ending

More of a limmerick

The talk had ended, the day had left, the night had come.
The feelings swirmed, the emotions turned, the heart was taken.
The love had felt, the feeling was good, the heart had been heard.
The sadness was fading,the real sadness began, the talk had stifend
The night had ended, the talk was done, the goodbye's were said.
The goodbye's were brief, the emotion was there.......Then why no "I
love you"?.

Author's Note

Go for it

Reviews

[~The Queen~]

Nice. I liked it. It was very nice tho I didn't no the point until the end. (then again I'm not good at reading poems lol. :) keep it up!! ^^

[Ericka Ray]

So sad...why so sad man!! Come on!! Be happy don't worry now. (I need your permission to add you in a story of mine.)