Stop pretending ..

It hurts but you can't feel me, 

I cry but you still can't hear me,

I'm so close but you don't come near me,

I lie but you don't look through me,

I smile and you think I'm really happy,

I scream and you don't understand why,

But you still pretend you love me ...

Reviews

[Donna]

I like that! Nicely written!

[Fatima]

Thanks a lot, Donna :)

[Govind singh]

Small but Depp!!!!well structured..best wishes:)

[Fatima]

Thank you, Govind i appreciate your comment.

[Govind singh]

Ur most wlcm...u deserve it..

[Coyote Poetry]

Few people see us. New world. Cell phones and computers. I miss the days of eye to eye conversation and real concern. Your words, hard, honest and direct. Thank you Fatima for sharing your powerful words and thoughts.
Coyote

[Fatima]

Thank you Coyote, but in fact i am quite young so don't really have a great understanding of how things were before, however i understand your insight and it's very true. I'm sure this world would be very different if people would show true concerns instead of concealing or even lying straight up to your face. Really appreciate it. Thanks.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are right Fatima and you are welcome.

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

Hmmm that place where u find yourself if broken down communication and living a lie- we need to love ourselves enough to respect ourselves and do what’s right for us- true love is not lonely or confusing or deaf- deep words I know exactly how you feel been there for tshirt🌹

[Fatima]

I 100% agree with you, that's so true. Thanks for reviewing :)

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

ONLY a pleasure🌹

[Zoya]

I strongly despise pretentious people, and more than that, pretentious love. For them love is just a game.

Much said in a few words. Nice write!

[Fatima]

Your insight is so true! Thanks Zoe. Hope i'm as good as you some day :)

[Zoya]

Gosh, I'm just a novice like you! You're already quite good and no doubt you'll only get better with time :)
A pleasure!

[Fatima]

That's so sweet of you, thanks for your kind words...hopefully.

[Zoya]

........:)