The meeting

If i were to see you
I would freeze
No words would come up
Anxiety would grip me
And memories would do a full rotation
Like the eclipse

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

The eclipse blots out the sun and puts us in darkness. Your lines here don't leave me with a good feeling. Better you don't see this person. So much conveyed in your short poem.

Chris

[Intothemilkyway]

I like short ones. They convey meaning much better.