Like Dreams

My memories of you 

Everything we lived through

Shortly,

It was like a dream.

You know how dreams are short , right?

In the end it was my dream.

Not yours.

I get to live and relieve it again and again.

But like this it just hurts me.

I have to stop reliving the dream and move on.

In the end i can't keep dreaming about a dead place

of the past where in my future it doesn't exist anymore.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Hard to do, but we must my dear friend.
"I have to stop reliving the dream and move on.
In the end i can't keep dreaming about a dead place
of the past where in my future it doesn't exist anymore."
To kill a memory is hard. My old dad told me. "Best way to forget a old lover. Find a new one." Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

[Intothemilkyway]

Indeed so Coyote. :) appreciate your review

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure my dear friend.

[Wanderer]

Beautiful poem..thanks for sharing

[Intothemilkyway]

Thank you for reading it.

[Carlos Lorenzo Estrada]

This is a beautiful poem that is very heartfelt. And one that many of us in life can empathize with. Thank you for sharing your poem.

[Intothemilkyway]

Thank you for reviewing it .

[Tina]

I can relate to this poem. very good

[barleygirl]

I often say that expectations are the biggest curse in relationships & your poem seems to illustrate how that can happen. We silly humans envision a person or situation the way we want it to be, rather than learning to love what's right in front of us without any editing (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Intothemilkyway]

That's so true and that's why we have to see the person for what they are and not how we make them be.

[Einstein Noodle]

"In the end it was my dream.
Not yours." strong turn says i! its heck to bear a broken heart :(
E.

[Intothemilkyway]

It is my dear friend. But life goes on and we shall enjoy it till the end.

[Einstein Noodle]

might as well ;)

[Wild Rose]

How I wish that those dreams did not keep repeating
Almost like a Christmas time TV show

All the old favourites
And some not so favourites that come to break your heart again; and again

[Intothemilkyway]

I wish it did not too. But that's how we are build up in the end.

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Raw with images that haunted me. The way you control and manipulate time is pretty skillful.
I immediately felt the urge to let go and be carried away by your thoughts. Well Penned.

[Intothemilkyway]

Thank you for your review. Really got something new that i wouldn't have said myself.