Sunday Blues

In the middle of the day

When it's not night yet

Tears flow and they fall down my cheeks

I look at the time

And it's just 2 o'clock

Too soon to cry

But it's just Sunday vibes

Outside it's sunny

But in my heart it's raining

I think about those times

A song comes in my mind 

I play and replay 

I leave my heart to overthrow the pain 

I feel it all the way

From my head to my toes

And i still cry anyway

I have to find peace 

Even though

I can't ,

But just for now 

I let tears to fill my face

With salty water

Just like the ocean

I can't think

I can just feel.

In this Sunday morning

afternoon and glory

Lonely.

In  my own Sunday Blues.

Reviews

[barleygirl]

I love this poem . . . "it's just 2 o'clock, too soon to cry" . . . one of my favorite lines of the week! Even tho there are many upbeat Easter postings around, I'm drawn to your blue message becuz it's closer to the way I think most people feel in general, but also now that Easter get-togethers are disallowed & it seems everyone is raging about something. It's such a noisy angry vibe "out there" . . . no wonder people feel lonely & blue. I love how your poem states it in a way that's not feeling sorry for oneself, but just describing how it feels with strong sensory imagery (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Intothemilkyway]

Yes maybe people needed some relaxed and joyous poem. But i was feeling this one.
Happy Easter to you my dear friend
*XOXOXO*

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing use of words. Had the feel of a song in the words. A jazzy sad song of someone making wishes and remembering. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry. I did like this one. Would be outstanding verbal poetry.
Coyote

[Intothemilkyway]

Right, i think so too. It would be wonderful if it would be read out loud

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree. The word flowed with ease and would sound good.

[Jibey]

You let the feelings flow onto the page, writing how it was and simply stating that sense of helplessness... the ache of loneliness and of love unrequited...

A powerful, honest poem

[Intothemilkyway]

Yes i did so, the hurt sometimes helps create much better poems in my opinion.

[Eilis]

Maybe we all feel a bit of this at the moment. One thing extraordinary about this moment in history is that we are all emotionally connected as we experience the same fears and uncertainties. It sort of opens our eyes to the ways we’ve all always been connected but maybe just didn’t realize it.

Again, I enjoy the honesty of your poetry. There is something sustaining in the lines. Allowing the rawness of the momentary emotion to flood and then spill over. Your line expressing rain in your heart is just a lovely way of describing that overflow of emotion.

The contrast between the inner and outer worlds is deeply felt here. Allowing these expressions out into the world is such an important way of managing emotion. Letting the rain and ocean of emotion be transformed into poetry.

I really enjoyed your poem. Hopefully Wednesday is a brighter day with less inner blues.

[Intothemilkyway]

Thank you for reviewing one of my poems again.
Really enjoyed reading all your thoughts in this one.
It's one of my favorites i have done by now.
Im very proud of it.