Did you know there was a time when i hated poetry and thought it was stupid and not cool?
Well guess who loves it now and deeply sees it as communication to their spirit and soul.
It's so simple, beautiful and meaningful.
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I love the way your poem addresses the age-old pondering about how two people can be looking at the same moon, but still be so far from each other. Your words convey a ton of longing & disappointment, with a few touches of hopefulness & I love the way your message gets more & more hopeful toward the end, which is exactly how it can feel when we gaze into the night sky (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie
A wonderful poem shared. When we are faraway from the people we love. Can feel like we are the sun and the moon. I enjoyed the entire poem. You allowed the reader to feel and understand the words.
Coyote
Posted 4 Years Ago
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4 Years Ago
Yes i did so. You understood it right away
4 Years Ago
I did. I use the moon and the sun often in my words. Nature make us know what life can be.
I love the way your poem addresses the age-old pondering about how two people can be looking at the same moon, but still be so far from each other. Your words convey a ton of longing & disappointment, with a few touches of hopefulness & I love the way your message gets more & more hopeful toward the end, which is exactly how it can feel when we gaze into the night sky (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie