Just a mind walk

Summer passed by
Even winter is passing by,
Only you aren't.
I play crazy
I felt heavy
Lonely on my own
Still better that you're gone
I can't say i didn't like it
But you weren't the right one
Crazy in love
But so out of love.
Wanna fool myself
But i just can't.
Vengeance comes in my mind
But it's not worth my time.
Said Goodbye
You're finally out of my mind.

Reviews

[Wild Rose]

Just friends
We find people to love - no it is not quite right
Something is missing
We pass on like ships in the night

[Pete]

i think this is more than just a walk - is a stroll with being in and out of love. love is an odd thing - we can both adore and hate when it goes bad. deep, honest feelings you share. very relatable as most of us have been there ... :)

[Intothemilkyway]

Indeed, we can clearly see both sides. It really is like a rollercoaster. You will feel all kinds of emotions.

Your comment was so kind. Enjoyed reading it. ^^

[jacob erin-cilberto]

as Friar Lawrence told Romeo..."it's violent delights that make for violent ends"
love can be crazy good but turn crazy bad in a millisecond....
sharp write here...like a tornado of words passing through.
j.

[Intothemilkyway]

Loved that Shakespeare tragedy reference. It suits my poem very well. Thank you for your sharp word of choice. It's incredible.