Quite Simple

Again in my sleep
I wake up from my dream
I hate the vibes you give,
And the distance you keep.
Slowly my brain is giving up
Leaving my soul to die.
I don't feel alive
It has been quite a while.
Since the last time,
Of you and i .

Once i forget my phone
I look through my window
A shining light comes by,
It's that of the moon,
The only thing that i look
That makes me feel the worth,
Worth of this world.
It doesn't make sense
But just for instance,
I feel okey.
I feel good,
Maybe today,
Not tomorrow,
One day,
When i don't feel dead
I will revive

Reviews

[Onlyme]

What a very moving, sad, heartbreaking poem, of not feeling alive, depressed, isolated and so alone in this world. Outwith finding comfort in the dark and the moon at night. That is like a warm blanket close to your skin. But also knowing in the last few stanze not to give up. But to know in your heart of hearts one day you will feel renewed and revived.

[Intothemilkyway]

Thank you Dawn. I especially made this for my friend.
I love your review, iam very pleased with it.

[jennifer little]

great job on this poem very inspiring and its really amazing on how you went with the flow of it keep up the good work

[Intothemilkyway]

Thank you dear.
I'm very happy you liked it.

[jennifer little]

your welcome