Don't let me love you

A story your heart desires.The story of Heart.

Wonded but still beating.

Beats so strong that she can't stop.

The sound of her love is heard everywhere.

She is made to love,to be happy.

She dances even to her own beat.

And she loves it so much.

She can't die.

But the knight came.

He pushed his spade right in the center.

And it hurt her deeply.

She started to cry.

Her cry was heard all over.

Everyone came forth to fight the knight.

But he was strong.

And so they thought, and thought till they found it.

The solution to the heart.

They started to sing.

They sang so loud that even the birds became their companions.

She smiled.

And laughed.

That she started to beat once again.

Like the sound of a non stopping drum.

The knight was very shocked and he started to push even more,deeper than before.

But the spade broke.

It broke into little tiny pieces that they became beautiful rose petals.

The knight fell on the ground.

The sound became so loud he covered his ears.

He hated it.

So he ran away to never be seen again.

Everyone was happy and so was she.

She had the protection of everyone and a love so big no one could destroy.

And  so she lived long and healthy.

An immense happiness caught her that she decided to live 

with everyone on earth.

As long as she had everybody she could not be hurt.

An she knew that even if, she would always rise again 

for the sound of her to be heard once again.

Reviews

[barleygirl]

Your poem is a powerful way to show that we can combat negativity with positivity. Many times people let "failed love" or "rejection" drag down one's will to live -- they fail to thrive, unable to be creative. I love your metaphor of music & dance as a means for swishing away negativity. "Failure" is just an illusion based on someone's need to judge. There's so much more out there to dance about & your poem guides us to bigger & better possibilities (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Intothemilkyway]

I love every time you review my poems. You are amazing Margie. * hugs to you back*

[Apollos]

Enjoyed it!

"The sound became so loud he covered his ears.
He hated it."

Interesting how sounds can be pleasing to the ears of some and distasteful to others.

What would you say the knight symbolizes in your story?

[Intothemilkyway]

Thank you very much for reading it.
You asked a very great question.
As always matters of heart consist of two persons. And the Knight symbolises the Guy in the relationship. But it also can symbolize the people who hurt you.
It can vary from close to strangers too.
In some way people always find a way to hurt you.

[Apollos]

I like it! That’s a good idea personifying that person as the “knight” so that it puts off this image they have your best interests at heart until they actually have access to your heart.