Empty

I loved you, but not anymore. Hate is all i got.

My eyes look empty
Dead like a flower in a desert
My heart has turned black

Who ever stands in front of me
I can't see
It's all blurry
Tears have blocked my vision

I don't feel a thing anymore
If you don't care about me
It's Goodbye.

I had so much to give you
But i won't try anymore
It's time to leave you

The beginning is all beautiful
Like the rainbow ,
But once it disappears
Only sadness and loneliness remains.

We are slowly parting ways
Without even saying a word
You left me,
And iam leaving you.

Just like that our love ends.
It's sad.
But maybe in another life,
We'll meet again.

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

how interesting ..i read your oldest post here and the theme is the same but this has added passion ... the pain of loss and grieving over unrequited love ... the pain and passion that drives so much of the Arts .. but i think especially the poets ;) in "Empty" she seems to have survived ..but is marked with a deeper lesson that pain offers us ... patience, understanding, compassion, and more true a love ... sure am enjoying your style .. it has innocence and honesty
E.

[Cortez]

it seems that the person either left or died. Overall a deep, moving poem.

[Unspoken poet]

My eyes look empty
Dead like a flower in a desert
My heart has turned black

I really love this part, this is amazing, emotional and well expressed

[Chris]

...or never have met at all.

sigh, set the mood for a melancholy morning. Such a world we share...

[gram linski]

sad but true, most people think what if … the first love is always the hardest to lose, enjoyed your poem, Intothemilkyway,

[HadesRising]

So sad, and very relatable, while I was reading this it actually made me sad a little and think of someone I lost. Very good read.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

A sad refrian indeed as the jilted lover appears to have decided life is not worth living without the person who meant so much? A flowing freeverse with pathos!