You and me

This is a complete different poem from my previous one. It does not have any connection to " You and I"

Heal or break 

Fight or surrender 

Alive or dead

Which is it?

Tell me

"Did you love me ?"

Or "Did you hate me?" 

I don't know is what you said

I left you and you left me

We left behind lots of good memories 

We left behind a beating heart which was dead

We had no communication or whatsoever 

You said what you said 

And i said what i said

Everything ended with a goodbye.

Reviews

[bigfootprint]

No time for sadness, huh? You give us a treat here, a mini-treatise on superficiality and inhumanity -- so much everywhere these days. Simple imagery for a meaty topic. Still, you shun the melancholy and keep your guard up with enough rhyme to keep it lively. Good job.

[Matt B]

Very to the point and showed true feelings, like the way you can feel the situation.