Love or Hate

Love or Hate

A Poem by Intothemilkyway

Is it love we had or was it hate
Saying that you love me when you don't 
Saying it so casually but the truth is 
You don't. 

Are you sure that is love?...
Do you hate me ? ...
Or do you love me?..

I only hear silence. 
Are we breaking up ?,...
If not come and stay here.

It's already too late
You are gone and iam not staying 
Everything has already ended. 
I already said GoodBye.

© 2018 Intothemilkyway


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ahahaha i love that she beat him to the punch :) men can be so dishonest about such things .. i will be the first to admit it ... but most grow up one day and realize what they lost in the process .. and many become fine loving mates ... wonderful honesty in this .. i see your protagonist as a teen ... like my daughters when they were teens ;) we have all made it through those turbulent years ... so happy in "Love or Hate" that she didn't waste any more time on that guy
E.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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ahahaha i love that she beat him to the punch :) men can be so dishonest about such things .. i will be the first to admit it ... but most grow up one day and realize what they lost in the process .. and many become fine loving mates ... wonderful honesty in this .. i see your protagonist as a teen ... like my daughters when they were teens ;) we have all made it through those turbulent years ... so happy in "Love or Hate" that she didn't waste any more time on that guy
E.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sad you parted
OR did you just drift apart
Like two sticks in a stream
parted by the eddies

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really liked this verse. Especially the last stanza.
If you've already said goodbye, you might as well [not] stay.

A good read, my friend.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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