I love

This is short and maybe lame, but it's for my nephews. <3

I ain't been around much.

Ain't had much to say.

Sometimes the sun comes up right.

Sometimes it just stays gray.

Don't ask me how I feel right now.

Cause in a minute it's gonna change.

But understand my love, dear.

It'll never go away.

Reviews

[Scott_Central]

Enchanting :) Cant think of another word for it :)

[Alex Zynder]

i like the balance and the honesty of this poem. sweet and classical to me.

[Alicia_Skye]

Sotally not lame! I agree with Debbie, very beautiful and real. Anyone who reads it can tell you love your nephews, as you wrote, the love for them will never go away.

[DebbieB]

This poem brings tears to my eyes, Dawn -- it is so beautiful and real. Hugs for you and your nephew.