Middle Finger

I see you've come back around
I've got but one thing for you
Say hello to my middle finger
And nice big 'f**k you'
I've got no time for this
The never ending bull s**t
I've got my own life now
You're not part of it.

So pack up your insecurities
And get the f**k out
I've learned that mind games
Are what you'll all about
It's too bad that you're too stupid
To keep up with what you start
It looks like your web of lies
Is too much for your fragile heart

With this I hope you die alone someday
Just like you always wanted
Live out that life you desire
Of always being haunted
But I will have none of that
Quite frankly I'm much better
I'll live on in greatness
Forgetting you forever

Reviews

[highthought]

maybe u said that with a smile ...or maybe he was looking at ur pretty face ...in this way he wont feel pain

[Ees]

I love the first and second stanzas! They are fast and angry and really wonderfully written. Great job. I see know "blog entry" as that one reviewer stated, but real, honest and well done poetry.

I don't much care for the last stanza, but I do think that you can work on it and make it stronger, though I don't think that I would be bothered if it was dropped altogether. It just seems a little too directed at one person to match up with the rest of the poem. Or it seems a bit contradictory. Did this person really wish to die alone? If so, why would they come back, and why do you hope that they get what they want? It just doesn't seem to match. Do people want to be haunted?
I don't know, work on the last stanza, don't touch the first or second stanzas. They are amazing! I love them and they are so strong as they are right now!

[Chemical Kitten]

Thank you for your review, gave me a new perspective on this poem :)

[Bare Trees]

No offence, but this sounds more like a blog than poetry. So much cursing and anger!

[Somebrownnerd]

Well i certainly felt the anger. The hurt that can be caused in a relationship cuts deep, this poem actually reminded me of some advice a friend of mine gave me some time back after a rough breakup. He said "Hate her, even if you were the one to end it, because if you don't; You will carry would could have been to the grave." Interesting how nice poetry can bring back memories. Good read!

[Fernanda]

That's a very good poem! The way you put your anger into words... it's amazing how you can turn something so terrible into something so beautiful!