Love

Oh yes the ever so overdone and classical poetry about love.

She lost her mind

a while back

she fell for love

a vicious attack

upon her heart

so frail and weak

with stolen breath

she couldn't speak

no feeble screams

or begs or pleas

a victim to this

incurable disease

but with the pain

brought endless bliss

her heart raced

with every kiss

and though she suffered

oxygen deprived

her heart grew strong

with love it thrived

Reviews

[Emily Feret]

wow, what a strong piece about love attacking your senses! I really liked every aspect of this poem, from the font to the placement to the rhyme scheme, just everything. Top notch

[InternalNirvana]

(another) sorry for a late reply, but thank you soso much lovey, I'm glad you liked the piece (:

[Azriel]

lovely piece, loved the rhythm and flow of it, also really liked the story telling like style of it. overall lovely poem

[InternalNirvana]

Sorry for such a late reply, and thank you I was aiming for a style of the sort. (:

[Chris Dominguez]

very deep. I love the rhyming scheme it is hard to do that and find sufficient words to fit each line. I think you did a nice job in doing so because i know many people who can ruin a poem trying to rhyme but you prevailed. Nice work :)

[InternalNirvana]

I apologise for such a late response but thank you so much, I appreciate it a lot love (: