Dark Side

Your eyes 

held stars

your words 

became constellations

your thoughts

created galaxies

I couldn't fathom

You stole my breath

and didn't stop there

my heart, soul, and body

you claimed 

When I made you

my moon

in the midnight sky

I was deaf to the stars

screaming

you had a dark side.

Reviews

[~a.wall~]

This is well written. at the same time it confuses me. I suppose that is good though. You go from the always positive form of talking highly of someone to snapping and saying something negative about them. it was very entertaining

[InternalNirvana]

Why thank you, I hope it is a good thing(: . And in my experience that's often what happens with people, they're your everything only to have an undeniable dark side.

[~a.wall~]

it is very true. I must say that you have a very strong grasp on people's behavior