In dismay

I've abandoned
what I love most

I let go of

my passion

and my heart

is pulsing wildly

in dismay

wondering 

why my mind

would make

such a choice

Reviews

[~a.wall~]

Short sweet and to the point. I like it but it seems like it is solely about misery

[InternalNirvana]

Just the way I meant it to be, and some things are solely miserable

[~a.wall~]

yes but why not look at the good that comes from that?

[InternalNirvana]

because it is easier to see the bad

[~a.wall~]

thats what makes the good better. accepting the challenge to see the good

[Guilt]

The war between heart and mind. It seems the mind won this round. I liked the brevity in this piece.

- Guilt

[InternalNirvana]

You're very correct in that observation, and thank you (: