Rose

I guess this is a Roses point of view. I let my fingers take control and this is what I came up with! Hope you like!

           Bright with Love,

           Soft like Velvet,

           Sharpened Thorns,

           As Beautiful as a Rose,

           For that Is what I am,

           A Rose.

 

Yellow as Day,

Red as Blood,

White Innocence,

Pink Sympathy,

Peachy Gratitude,

Blackened Farewell.

 

           I slowly fly away,

           My petals falling,

           As do many other flowers,

           Flowing away in the gentle wind,

           I go now, but for I will be back,

           Next Time.

 

Different but the Same.

Reviews

[Star Bright]

Beautiful poem (: You can totally see the feeling you put into it. My favorite part is:
"I slowly fly away,
My petals falling,
As do many other flowers,
Flowing away in the gentle wind,
I go now, but for I will be back,
Next Time."

[Persephone]

Thanks for all the comments and I think I could have changed it a little.... Instead of like "As do many other flowers," I could have changed it too : "Other flowers do the same" maybe....

[Kita Tataki (Emily Conn..]

I slowly fly away,

My petals falling,

As do many other flowers

This is really gorgeous. This is a great poem, and I really liked the touch in which you described the emotional quality of each color

[Dream Weaver]

I loved this it's beautifully done,
with a special twist. Very Very
inspirational....

[Alex Luna]

Like it though i think it might be better if you could make it flow faster but good job!