Loving you

I'm bored.

So many of my days

Too many of my hours spent on you

Wish I could quit

It never stops

But I don't know

And I can't hide

Too many hidden thoughts

And now they aren't on my side

But I can't quit loving you

You know it's true

But I can't loving you

You know it's true

Too many weeks

I've spent trying

To get you to love me like I love you

But I can't quit loving you

You know it's true

But I can't quit loving you

You know it's true

And I'll never stop trying

And I'll never stop reaching for you

Because I can't quit loving you

You know it's true

I can't quit loving you

You know it's true

Author's Note

I know, it's bad

Reviews

[Apebble]

It's very rare that a poem will be inherently bad. It may appear bad, but you never know that your exact combination of words will effect someone in a special way you never imagined possible, so don't count yourself out before you get started :)

I don't think it's bad at all, in fact I find it fairly good. It displays a very honest approach to an emotional problem most have or will face.

Although I liked the poem as a whole, I didn't care for the repetition of 'But I can't quit...You know...' That may just be me, but thats the only part I didn't care for.

Btw- You left out the word 'quit' in the 3rd stanza in the third line (or at least I am assuming you did) :)