Cant change your family

whats in my mind right now

family or friends who'll truly last till' the end? and if you ask for my opinion i've already seen and been to the end and guess who was on my side it was fam' not a friend. but most recently I've come to realize one little mess up and you're no longer fam' in their eyes. key word their because i cant say me cause no matter what you do you'll always be close to me. and for all the people reading this I bet you're wondering, who's this young hurt kid babble about, who's yet to be mentioned or seen? and the simple answer to that is, the man who created, my FATHER. 

Author's Note

it's kinda lyrical not a poem

Reviews

[Annie S]

Yes it is lyrical and i simply like it, just the 'key word their'
change it to 'there' otherwise keep writing more. Will looking forward to it :)

[TheOnlyOneLeft]

thanks for the feed back and thanks again :')

[Annie S]

you are welcome :)