Wet Diamond Raindrops

I randomly thought, rain is like wet diamonds falling from the sky. The rain is rich (its very valuble even though we regard it as not doing much) and like diamonds, they are valuble but do nothing.

Wet Diamond Raindrops

 

The heaven open, the clouds form,

The skies darken, the rain falls.

 

They fall like bullets, the clouds dive,

There cold as death, the wind glides.

 

Millions rain, they fall as one,

Some sharp as blades, some are not.

 

The shine like stars, they fall with speed,

There like wet diamonds.

 

There like wet diamond raindrops,

Sharp and cold fall from the sky,

They fall in millions,

From the clouds they fly.

Author's Note

This is just a random idea I though about and in the end decided to write about it; many people dont like pieces without rhyme but I did it here to use the rhyme at the end as a finish to the poem. Enjoy, comment as you please.

Reviews

[alexlessah]

Very nice poem with deep description.

[CR8TEME]

Its very clear and descriptive. You can tell you have a talent for writing, and think about things deeply.

[Legacy]

Inspired95,

You have the ability to throw randomness into clarity.

This write, combines nature and war in a well thought-out poem. I admire the descriptiveness - the imagry is outstanding. I watched rain clouds dive, wow! Never thought I would think of clouds quite that way.

Outstanding work and thank you for sharing.

Have a great day,

Legacy