Crazy

Crazy

A Poem by Mark

I don't want the power in love
I don't aim to be your master
Falling down all around
like so much well meant disaster
Oh, I never wanted a slave
I pursue a life less ruled
But if you walk without your chains
Perhaps we can make each other crazy
I'm just a human in need of suspense
No need to fail, no dire need of gold
Sometimes I fall down all around
My one need; for truth to be told.
Oh I'm no angel
nor aspiring demon
just someone to hold
when it gets dark.
If you walk, walk with me
I do not follow
but I will hold you
and drive you crazy
I pursue a life of me
where I want to go
and I don't want you to be
just someone to follow
I want a partner
friend, confidant...
I need a defender
and someone crazy
Someone crazy like
someone crazy about
someone I can be crazy
for and with and 
forever.

© 2014 Mark


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There's good crazy and there's bad crazy, this is definitely the good kind!
Crazy love is the best, most fun and adventurous kind of love! Enjoyed this Mark!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mark

9 Years Ago

It's good to love. I think it's most enjoyable when it is given without expectations but being human.. read more
Ana D S M

9 Years Ago

You're welcome. :)
In mutual craziness there is passion and love. Well versed and written. Doesn't it capture the desire for crazy love in us all?

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I would think the last 2 stanzas tell the world just what you are looking for in your Gypsy life. A deeply exposing write of a strong personality. Valentine

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I think I've seen that old guy before. Wasn't he in Weird Al Yankovic's "UHF ?"

And yes, when all the mind games are over and done, whatever remains is the glue for that relationship. And if it doesn't stick, it wasn't meant to be. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Mark

9 Years Ago

Thanks DW haven't been on this site in quite awhile but saw your name and decided to come see. What .. read more
dw817

9 Years Ago

The guy who meets the teenagers in the video. Let me see if I can find a clip from UHF.
http:.. read more
heck yes!!! ME too... won't follow and don't want someone to follow.. a friend... confidant... want someone just as crazy... just as crazy about me.... cuz I ain't no angel... haha... never heard this song, but nice accompaniment.... well done!!!

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is an awesome poem! Love the sixth and the last stanza!

Posted 10 Years Ago


this is a wonderful poem.
I'm just a human in need of suspense
No need to fail, no dire need of gold
Sometimes I fall down all around
My one need; for truth to be told.
nothing wrong with being real.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Ha Mark a brutal honest verse setting out clearly who you are and the kind of relationship you seek. Hope she is listening!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Great words here Mark....great meanings... well written and I understand :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


a simple wish really. let's be crazy together. a good recipe for happiness.
I like this very much.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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