bringing Spring

I never thought I'd say it but enough Winter!

So if I shake, it's just a chill;

remains left of bony fingered Winter.

I keep my eyes closed so

I can bring Spring around me.

I tug at my sweater and 

fill my head, heart, and soul.

I gather and build a fact.

The Sun WILL warm me.

Reviews

[Blue]

The hope that inspired this write is contagious. But if you're here in my country right now, you wouldn't ask the sun to warm you. It's boiling here and we are being fried alive.

[Mark]

Get a plane ticket Blue LOL nice and cool here in the states. Even down south by Mexico, it was in the 60's

[jacob erin-cilberto]

oh yes, "i build a fact, the Sun will warm me."

well, we hope...don't we?

i really like the way you worded this.

[Gleb Zavlanov]

Spring is a very lovely, majestic season, and your very few words hold a massive impact for me. I loved this poem. Thanks for sharing.

[icelandicblue]

It may be late but we remember the awe and comfort that Spring affords us. She breathes life into us once more but we are dutiful children so we clutch our sweaters and wait for her to appear and rescue us. I like the imagery very much in this poem.

[Mark]

Thanks for reading ice :)

[Beccy]

Spring in the air and in the heart. Lovely read and just in time to greet the first daffodils as they start to bloom.

Beccy.

[Ruth]

That's the way hon, bloody tell it! lol Then maybe I can believe so too ;) x

[Mark]

Sending big warm hugs :)

[Mockingbird]

that's the only thing we can do is close our eyes and pray for spring to come. it's been such a long winter, it's good to keep a positive attitude.

[s y e]

I am so proud of you dude, you improve with every poem you write. It's truly magnificent. Send some spring to me please? ;-)

[Mark]

Ha as soon as I find some!

[s y e]

Merci, Son...

[K.N. Lorenzen]

A very fine supplication for spring :)
Great read, Mark!

K.

[Coyote Poetry]

We got 5 inches of snow yesterday in Michigan. Old Winter is holding on. I'm hoping for the Spring days. Poor Grand boys need to go out and play. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote