Noise

Noise

A Poem by Mark
"

It's your one way ticket to midnight...

"
Immersed....

I fall into a lake of sound
closing my eyes to let it melt
around me.

Vibrations and emotions
creating my heartbeat
in sync.

melody, solo in the ear
felt deep in my heart
pushing water.

Letting my body express
in motion what the beat
tells me.

How would I know I was alive
with no music?

© 2014 Mark


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First of all I love that soundtrack. Takes me back to a lot of good memories!! Secondly I felt your words to my soul...its exactly how I feel when listening to music. Loved this one Mark!!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Very cool, you should listen to Black Sabbath more often Mark ;-)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Mark

10 Years Ago

Black Sabbath? I thought it was the Hagar tune I was putting up here... now I see it was the soundtr.. read more
Mark

10 Years Ago

there, got it fixed now.
Sounds like an ode to Rock n roll to me. Awesome

Posted 10 Years Ago


Mark

10 Years Ago

Yeah,, thanks Mark
Mark this is another piece with a classic ending,


How would I know I was alive
with no music?


Posted 10 Years Ago


Mark

10 Years Ago

Thank you A :)
This is fabby Mark... I loved it. This is just perfect. Music is my life, I don't know where I would be without it... I loved those last two lines - they spoke volumes to me.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Mark

10 Years Ago

Thanks hon, you know this song?
s y e

10 Years Ago

Yes. I like it!
and what a lovely way to let some poetry drift in there to be made as well.....

Posted 10 Years Ago


Mark

10 Years Ago

THank you Stella
Stella Armour

10 Years Ago

my pleasure Mark..:o)
If you don't love Sammy, get bent.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Mark
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