Noise

It's your one way ticket to midnight...

Immersed....

I fall into a lake of sound

closing my eyes to let it melt

around me.

Vibrations and emotions

creating my heartbeat

in sync.

melody, solo in the ear

felt deep in my heart

pushing water.

Letting my body express

in motion what the beat

tells me.

How would I know I was alive

with no music?

Author's Note

Reviews

[Kellyrose]

Music certainly evokes all emotions...I too would not know if I was alive without music; great write

[Mockingbird]

music can be soothing and meditative.

[Mark]

yes it can! :) thanks for reading.

[Blue]

You've said so well how music affects us. I'm a music lover myself and I like how you synonym-ize music and life. Well done, Mark!

[Mark]

Thank you Arzel! Music is one of the universal human wonders. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree. We need music. Silence would drive us to madness if we could not hear the sound of music, laughter and nature. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[AYVID N]

"melody, solo in the ear
felt deep in my heart
pushing water."

This is what music is meant to be...food for the soul....

The conclusion is perfect, no music makes life like a black and white movie...

[Mark]

Most definitely! Pleasure to meet another music lover. Thanks

[paddy d daly]

I'm sorry, but I don't get this thing of adding a backing track to what you have written, and I am not just referring to you mark, lots of writers do it, for me it's either poetry or music, I know the two merge but I think
both have to be your own, maybe I'm just old fashioned.

[Mark]

I certainly don't like everything people do here as well. Thanks for stopping by ;)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

You convey the spirit of this song, this melody... it has movement and energy... and I totally love that you took me on an enthralling trip..

Sweet music, Mark!~xoxo~:)

[Mark]

Thanks for stopping by sweetheart. :)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

It's my pleasure, my friend!~xoxo~:)

[Latifa]

melody, solo in the ear
felt deep in my heart
pushing water.
very well penned Mark

[Mark]

Thank you for stopping by :)

[Pryde Foltz]

Vibrations and emotions
creating my heartbeat
in sync.

melody, solo in the ear
felt deep in my heart
pushing water.

Loved the energy of this one, Mark. It was a wonderfully-crafted piece but still gave the feel of the raw. I am not sure, however, the words wouldn't stand better without the music … I feel they are dynamic enough on their own. But I could just be fuddy-duddy.

[Mark]

Yes, you are a fuddy duddy. Sammy is a god :P