Woman

Winking stars,

their smiles 

shine for you.

I wish I knew the words.

Maybe a compass to point you,

lenses to help you see.

In all the universe, in 

this tiny little world,

it is your uniqueness

that makes you beautiful.

Author's Note

picture from http://www.wallng.com/star-shine-vector-graphics-sfondi-per-computer/#.UoqlgfmThlA

Reviews

[TL Boehm]

it is your uniqueness that makes you beautiful. This is Hallmark worthy. Wonderful poem

[Jack...]

Beautiful Mark. It's nice to see this side of you pouring about upon the page. Nicely penned.

[Cassie]

romantic, mark you are really good at this.

[Stanley Wilson]

haha great one you will have all the girls mooning over those words. Not bad from a ruff tuff trucker!!

[s y e]

Awe, you're quite the romantic dude - absolutely stunning! I am so in love with this poem Mark, you've written a Gem!

[Mark]

I'm so glad you like it!

[KAOlmsted]

I love it when you write poems about me xD

Seriously, though...this is just exquisite, Mark.

[Mark]

I wrote it for women so it is about you. :)

[KAOlmsted]

Ha! ;-) Cheers, Mark!

[emmajoy]

Such few words but - what an immense emotion trickles from your heart, Mark! This is the greatest compliment you could pay a woman, ' .. it is your uniqueness ~ that makes you beautiful.'

[Mark]

Thank you Emma, I was inspired by this video actually. http://www.upworthy.com/2-people-described-the-same-person-to-a-forensic-artist-and-this-is-what-happene?g=2

[MOON]

Lovely flow beautiful sentiments and tribute.

[Mark]

Thank you very much for reading Moon :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

wow this is so touching...could not have been better expressed than with the metaphors from the stars..

the stars' smiles just for her.

this warms my heart, Mark...

jacob

[Mark]

Thank you jacob! I wrote this inspired by something I'd seen online. http://www.upworthy.com/2-people-described-the-same-person-to-a-forensic-artist-and-this-is-what-happene?g=2

[Quill~]

Enchanting! I adore this write, Mark... going into my faves. :)

[Mark]

Thank you for reading Quill :_)