Like Rain

I catch rain bringing 

fresh pieces of sky 

to the earth below.

Tasting the air

from up there

tames my tongue.

I could catch you like rain.

I would use you, fill you...

sky water on earth,

then bake us in my fire.

Author's Note

Picture from http://no-names.deviantart.com/art/hand-fire-love-185808706

Reviews

[TL Boehm]

fresh pieces of the sky to earth. That's exceptional!

[Ruth]

Two words....damn excellent! Yes...a fav, will return to read again, nice x

[Mark]

XO thank you dear Poppy. :)

[MsJewel]

Soft, sensual and filled with passion. A gorgeous poem and the graphic fits perfectly!

:) Julie

[Mark]

Thank you very much Julie :)

[Joyce S. Greene]

A striking poem, Mark. The graphic is a perfect complement to your words.

[Mark]

Thank you so much Joyce :)

[Sunflower/Sara Kendrick]

Interesting work..Passionate and expressive..Sara

[Mark]

Thanks for reading Sara

[Sunflower/Sara Kendrick]

Mark,

You are quite welcome..

Sara

[Mockingbird]

there is a tacit sensuality about it. always love your imagery!

[Mark]

You are kind. Thanks for reading :)

[Baby Ricochet]

WOW!! I'm stunned this is so good. Outstanding poem Mark. One of the best I've seen from you

[Mark]

Thanks Mark... that praise means a lot to me :)

[Mary]

totally amazing! Wonderful imagry

[Mark]

Thank you so much Mary. I'm so glad you liked :)

[s y e]

This is a stunner dude, I loved this one. You have totally blown me away with this write. I missed reading you!

[Mark]

thank you my dear Noodle. Always a pleasure !! :)