In my Head

nonsense from a scatological mind.

I think

I breath

I write.

In words pulled noggin style and spat through 

a keyboard, I explain the grinding

In my head.

Reviews

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

I can relate to this one...sometimes the act of writing is more like the act of "purging", or perhaps even "confession". Simple enough..."I think/I breathe/I write"...but it's never really that simple, is it? Nicely done.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Mark this has such a sense of frustration and the protagonist feels incredulous not merely an explanation me thinks?

[I Am Svetlana]

It's always good to use writing as a way to get our thoughts out. It should be a form of therapy that many should consider because it really does heal people in its own way. Plus, through the writing process, we begin to reveal things of ourselves and become more honest. We want each of our words to be heard, to be true. The right words for the world to hear and reflect on.

[Adam M. Snow]

This is a good short poem, keep 'em coming

[Mark]

Thanks Adam :) Glad you liked it.

[Adam M. Snow]

Anytime ;-)

[Chris]

Hi Mark, sure the hat wasn't loose?

I liked the way it built to the end.

[Mark]

The hat is always loose my friend! Thanks for reading.

[Chris]

Hi Mark... was a good read...

[Baby Ricochet]

Good short poem. Think I'll write a poem that's just one word. Like "F**K!!!" There's a lot you can read into it

[Mark]

Ha! the most multipurpose word there is.

[Ruth]

Well..what process is easy to explain? ;) Powerfully concise hon and let me wander through your mind :) x

[Mark]

Wouldn't that be fun! Especially for Halloween.

[Ruth]

lol Aye...

[Leslie Philibert]

an enigmatic write, like it although I got a bit lost here..

[Mark]

Thanks for reading! Even if it was confusing

[Frieda P]

That's as good a way as explaining the process as any, not sure what you mean by' scatological mind', that could mean so many things, and knowing you......just saying. ;-)

[Mark]

LOL ya... it does mean so many things. Thanks for reading.