The Right Zephyr
A Poem by
Mark
For Frieda.
Butterfly, wings scarred and damaged, Clings and waits, Knowing the right zephyr will come, So she can fly again.
© 2013 Mark
Reviews
short and sweet conjured up really great images
Posted 11 Years Ago
That's beautiful imagery. Thank you. :)
Posted 11 Years Ago
That's beautiful imagery. Thank you. :)
I like the posotive mantra this brings. Very powerfully-written!
Posted 11 Years Ago
I like the posotive mantra this brings. Very powerfully-written!
And a beautiful dedication to a beautiful heart! x
Posted 11 Years Ago
And a beautiful dedication to a beautiful heart! x
What I love about this one is a that if she is made of paper, she is not going to feel any hurt, what ever happens, nice writing.
Posted 11 Years Ago
What I love about this one is a that if she is made of paper, she is not going to feel any hurt, what ever happens, nice writing.
What an inspirational writing...loved it :-)
Posted 11 Years Ago
What an inspirational writing...loved it :-)
Such a thoughtful write for Frieda. Well done, Mark.
Posted 11 Years Ago
Such a thoughtful write for Frieda. Well done, Mark.
the thought is new... powerful write! loved it ^_^
Posted 11 Years Ago
the thought is new... powerful write! loved it ^_^
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Mark Dallas, TX
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I"m a gypsy born in New Hampshire, raised in Alaska, schooled in Washington, raised a family in California. Recently settled in Concord NH area. Where to next? I don't really have to think about it, i..
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