Ex

I felt the horns, hard and prolonged,

Pointed in one direction.

Star shaped, and pointless,

your terrible affection.

Weep you may, but those that hear

are silent in perplexion.

No one knows, no one falls

for tears without connection.

Reviews

[Zahra]

very nice, rhyming and flow are very good

[SHEEMA HUQ]

I found the mystery of this piece quite intriguing and appreciate how you have pieced this one together, your words have great meaning.

[Dye]

I love the first lines, it does paint a clear picture of your Ex for sure. "Tears without connection",also a great line, you can tell someone like to play the victim in their own pity party. Very well written and to the point.

[Mark]

Spot on... glad you got it.

[icelandicblue]

No one can really know what goes on between two people. I like the sharp edge of this.

[Kristin Lee]

Those Ex's will get you every time. Lot of powerful emotions playing in this poem, I like it.

[TL Boehm]

Star shaped and pointless. Wow. I am not sure what it is about that line that just grabs me and hangs on but I love it.

[Mark]

Thanks for reading :)

[Infinite hexes]

A good picture of a break-up

[Mark]

Thanks for reading>

[prachi prangya agasti]

short but nice one... liked it...

[Stanley Wilson]

tears without connection great line. good work Mark I think as it's a short one all the more potent.

[KeelyJane]

"tears without connection" I like that. You have to wonder why some people cry when they are the ones who did all the damage. Crocodile tears, I think its called. Nice one. Thanks for sharing.

[Mark]

She enjoyed people pitying her. I have no idea why. Thanks for reading