Nonsense

I didn't think, I just wrote

jam and cakes and feeling the brakes

horsell down the meander run

it fell, and broken shards no fun

wrestled the minds, twist til done.

Heart heard what she spoke

bones fell and then broke

even done the middle pink

whatever sizzling minds will think.

If dower tower flower power

were ruled in skied dark fire

Then walrus eyes red read coals

desire rests in those folds

I would speak, but mists are clear.

I wouldn't dream of taking,

that snow peak,with indecent fear

she couldn't seam the making.

Author's Note

capcha : mimusops

Reviews

[Baby Ricochet]

Dower tower flower power. Funny

[TL Boehm]

the wonderful thing about a poem like this is that the reader can infer all kinds of things - go off on little jaunts - I'm thinking of so many things....the open road - the surf - women - it sounds like the description of a woman in many places its awesome.

[Mark]

There's always a woman. Story of my life! Thanks for reading and I'm glad you got something from it.

[KAOlmsted]

A very good brain exercise. Sort of stream of consciousness meets Dr. Seuss with the rhyming (funny enough, The Kid is watching The Cat In the Hat as we speak..err, type) ;-)

[Mark]

Lol ya I sort of had on mind Bruce Springsteen's Blinded by the Light.

[KAOlmsted]

Yeah! Some silicon sister with a manager mister...but that's Manfred Mann, silly ;-) xoxo

[Mark]

Nope The Boss wrote it and sang it first. Look it up.

[KAOlmsted]

I know, but I like Manfred Mann better...I probably should have clarified that xD

[Mark]

I don't they changed the lyrics and sang dousch instead of deuce. The Boss will ALWAYS be better!!!

[KAOlmsted]

I think I have a natural disdain for "The Boss"...I'm not very good with authority ;-)

[Mark]

Lol Bruce is a rocknroll legend though.

[KAOlmsted]

Meh...you go ahead and say so, doll, I won't argue ;-)

[Mark]

Me and 20 million other fans can't be wrong :P

[KAOlmsted]

;-p (sorry...don't like him)

20,000,000? Really?? That's a lot of fans...still... I don't care for him...I never have. Nor Michael Jackson...everyone loves him...not my style. STILL love your poem, though ;-)

[Mark]

That's cool. I tend to like just about any kind of music. gangsta rap excluded.

[KAOlmsted]

Naturally ;-)

[Infinite hexes]

Ah you mentioning food just made me realize I'm hungry hahaha. This is has great wording, and you rhymed them well without thinking i guess. It was fun to read this :)

[Mark]

heehee, , it was all stream of consciousness I wrote what came into my head without really thinking about it.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

love this........makes me want to collaborate one more time with you, my excellent friend.

[Mark]

I would be honored! If you ever can find the time, send me a starter!!

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

We all love cakes my love, good read.

[Mark]

cake is great ! Thanks Thomas. :)

[Archangel Gabriel]

Nice fun little piece Mark even if somewhat deep

[Zahra]

very nice. Liked the way its flow brings out feelings and emotions from inside.

[Jack...]

You see, I understand this completely. You let the pen do the talking for you and it wrote this out in it's own language, with a little help from the brain attached to the hand which holds the pen. So we write, balanced on a pedestal of cottage cheese and cucumber sandwiches made the night before by the auto mechanic who lives down the street on Saturdays. See I speak pen too...

Very cool Mark, I love how this came out and your talent shows more and more each day.

[Frieda P]

Not sure this is nonsense, it was an intriguing read, but one I think only you know the true meaning of...felt a bit of toxicity in there though.

[Mark]

Everyone who gets to know me tells me abiut my dark side but no one has called it toxic before. Should I call the hazmat team? LoL thanks for reviewing

[Frieda P]

I've got them here, I'll send them right over, ha ;-)

[Mark]

LOL one used hazmat team. Currently in NJ

[Frieda P]

On second thought, I'll need them a while longer, sorry Charlie....